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"Anyway," Jack, the real Jack, yawns, "I love her. You're just copying me."

"So?" Dark Jack counters, "Now that I've met her, I want to keep her."

"J-Jack...?" you shiver, standing from your spot on the floor and walking between the two teens. "What's going on?" You look from one Jack to another.

"Get away from him!" Jack growls, grabbing your arm and yanking you towards him. Your heart flutters as your Jack clutches you to his chest. "I missed you so much," he whispers into your hair. You push him away, shaking your head. Though you still loved him, it wasn't enough. 

"Jack... both of you..." you swallow harshly, forcing a sob back down your throat, "I waited days, weeks, months just hoping someone would come and save me. Eventually, I figured it out." You chuckle darkly, "No one was coming for me. I had to sit on that throne and watch as people came in, suffering!" You begin shouting, tears streaming down your face, "I had to just watch!" you cross your arms, stepping away from both of the Jack's. "Take me home." you say, voice calm, lowering your eyes. 

"Fine." the voice is more of a whisper on the wind and when you look up, you're greeted by the sight of your bedroom. You collapse onto your carpeted floor, sobbing because you knew that you would never see Jack, either of them, ever again.

Wow, this is short. Want to know why it's short? Because it's that last part! Mwahahahaaha!
Also, Happy Birthday :iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:!
Love you! Sorry this is so sad but your other request will be out right away!
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Kanakyu Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
D: pleaseeeeeeee make a part 10 beg CloudDesperate for Ziggles+Yami :begging: 
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I made an epilogue...
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Kanakyu Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i 've already read it, sorry Sweating a little... 
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oops...
Maybe I'll make more...
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Kanakyu Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
really? o.o oh that'D be great !Thanks For The Llama Emote  Squeek Hug Emoticon - blush laugh girl something - 
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ya, I'll try! 
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Lovergirlnice Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013   Artist
what in the world have I just read and since when was the reader jacks girlfriend!!!why did u torture/confuse me why :cry: what have I ever done to u but it was still interesting i need moarr pwease :)
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There's more somewhere around here!
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Lovergirlnice Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013   Artist
can u link it?
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:iconlovergirlnice:
Lovergirlnice Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013   Artist
is that it? :(
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mhm, sorry
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Lovergirlnice Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013   Artist
oh we'll thanks
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem
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shaggysmypet84 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
im not being rude you still have my whacht but im comfused,what happend i got lost around 3 but i cept on reading to see if i get it but sadly i still dont so please tell me what the fuge happend. but other than that i still like whatever i understud and good luck peace out bra (hehe bra)
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ok, here we go.
3: Jack is flirting with you but someone breaks in and something (sand) makes you pass out
4: You wake up in North's home with the other Guardians. Jack and North begin fighting about if you actually cared about Jack or not because you were always nice. You also fall asleep again and Bunny takes you home when Pitch was waiting.
5: Jack realizes that Pitch was after you because you were a pure form of happiness. The gang goes to save you but you are no longer at your own home, instead, you're with Pitch
6: Pitch wants you, a 'princess' of light, to be his queen to rule everyone. Finally, he convinces you. Jack sulks.
7: For one year, you were Pitch's queen until one day, a man, Jack, but not Jack, showed up and stole you back. You find out that you control the good in the world
8: ANGST Also, there's an intruder.
9: The real Jack shows up and fucks shit up. You strut out of there, never to see them again
Epilogue: Jack comes back to say hey.

Sorry that it confused you!
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shaggysmypet84 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
thank you so much for clearing that up for me. now that i understand i'll re-read it and make shoure (sorry i really suck at spelling and im not feelling well) that i get it.wonce i do i will love it,hopefuly,other than that bye i'm leaveing.
ShaggysMyPet84
xoxoxoxoxoxoxooxxoxo
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! I'm sure it was just written poorly. No need to re-read unless you want to!
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Haru210 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
Noo!! Make it to a Happy End. Please :)
Whats with the other Guardians and with the two Jacks?
anyway.... it´s cool and exciting. Please More
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There is moreeeeee!!
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Konakona321 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
( )_( )
(0-0)
o(")(")

BUNNEH DOES NOT APPROVE OF ENDING
BUNNEH WANTS MOAR!
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There's one more part!!
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coco007aol Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:C NOOOOOOOOOOO MOAR!!!
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:iconlilacgiraffe:
lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Paaaaaaay meeeee! C:
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coco007aol Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-pays 30 pionts- Happy:stare:
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:iconlilacgiraffe:
lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Noooooo!!
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Snowflake316 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
D''''''':
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I just love looking at the faces you leave! XD
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Snowflake316 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Whyyyyyyyyyyyy?!?!?!?!
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
They amuse me!
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Snowflake316 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
D'X...........X'D
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
C:
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Snowflake316 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Amazing!
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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FrostBite98 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
NOOOOOOO!!!! This can't be the last part!!! Why!?!?!? :icontableflipplz: :iconruncryplz:
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It might not be! Shh!
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FrostBite98 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Really?! Yay! *cheers silently*
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!
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FrostBite98 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Woo! :iconranranruuplz:
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Mrs89fluffy Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
Your Just being an Asshole now, aren't you :iconnothappyplz:
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:iconlilacgiraffe:
lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I am!
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Mrs89fluffy Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
:stfu: im :steaming: cause of you (PLEASE O PLEASE, DONT END IT HERE!)
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:iconlilacgiraffe:
lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Be mad! (I might write another part later!)
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:iconmrs89fluffy:
Mrs89fluffy Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
Fine i will :iconfliptableplz: (and tanku, i NEED MA DAILY (more like monthly) JACK FROST)
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha!
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Mrs89fluffy Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Filmographer
*puts table back* im sorry... NO IM NOT XD (:iconfliptableplz: AGAIN!)
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Put the damn table back!
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Saphira12702 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
WHY END IT LIKE THAT NOOOOOOO
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lilacgiraffe Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeeessssss!
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Saphira12702 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
But y!
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